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    June 04

    Doll House

    A little girl found a dollhouse
    In a hidden room
    She loved to play dolls
    With this-Her love for it bloomed

    She saw a doll inside
    each room
    they all had something horrible
    that gave the girls a fright

    In the 1st room was the father It looked so much like hers
    but, he had a hole in his head
    it looked like murder had accrued

    In the 2nd room was the mother
    lying on the bed
    with bloody sheets and walls
    from the 50 knifes in her head

    In the 3rd room was a young girl
    look dead in her eyes
    she spoke to her in a smile
    and said "your turn to die"

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    Sarah wrote:
    hey im sarah, i just wanted to say i like your space and i like your poems they are very cool...anyway keep updating your space, have a great summer and try not get too bored...take care
    June 4

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